Back on the markers again and, for whatever reason, I've developed a taste for drawing…
Once Upon A Time In The West Again
Time for a watercolour again and today was looking like a good day to be painting in the garden. Ā After yesterday’s success with a Western and the previous failure with a local painting, I was going for a Western again. Ā I’m back to the opening scene of Once Upon A Time In The West, a Sergio Leone spaghetti Western that worked for me once before. Ā Let’s see how things went today.
I went for the key of purple cool today as I wanted there to be a bit of a chill going on. Ā My warm blue was French ultramarine, my cool red quinacridone magenta and my cool yellow transparent yellow. Ā Hematite violet genuine is the fourth headline star. Ā Raw sienna and Payne’s grey also had roles to play (while still fitting in the purple cool key) and the red and yellow cadmiums came on for a spattering at the end.
I made some smart composition decisions today. Ā The shot from the film was too wide, so I’ve narrowed the gap between figures two and three. Ā I left out a tall telegraph pole on the left that would have dragged the viewer out of the painting. Ā I removed lots of horizontal planks from the fence, leaving not much more than vertical posts – I just didn’t think I needed any more horizontal lines. Ā I decided that the one point perspective in the platform planks/stones would point towards the most distant figure. Ā And I added a hill in the far distance as the hills on the left and right might have looked a bit boring otherwise. Ā The left side of the distant hill is parallel to the telegraph wires; I quite like this, although I suspect it might break some composition rules. And I should have changed the direction of the shadows so that the second figure from the left wasn’t standing in the third figure’s shadow.
After marking everything out in pencil. I went in with the masking fluid. Ā I protected the outlines of all four figures and all the fence posts, spattered some spots over the station platform, reserved a highlight along the edge of the platform on the right and drew in some telegraph wires with a mapping pen and a ruler.
Next up was the sky in French ultramarine with some quinacridone magenta and hematite violet there to make things interesting. Ā Hematite violet definitely makes things interesting, with its granulation giving the a cracked but dirty appearance, as if I’ve dripped charcoal dust on the painting and tried to wipe it off. Ā While the sky was wet, I laid down a first coat for the left and right.
Then I started on the foreground. Ā First, I marked the edges of the planks/stones with the hematite violet. Ā After this had dried, I covered the platform with random blues, yellows and magentas, trying to veer towards blue in shadowy areas and yellow in the sun. Ā The third coat was made from a neutral mix of all three primaries, painting the platform stone by stone and slightly varying the mix of colours as I went along. Ā Then I did more work on the gaps between the stones, adding yellow in places and refining the shapes of the hematite violet marks in places. Ā Then I added some shadows in blue and hematite violet. Ā Next I put in a single glaze of raw sienna to bring the whole platform together. Ā Finally, I tinkered a bit by darkening the shadows and adding some random hematite violet to the stones in places.
While waiting for all these bits of work on the platform to dry, I went over my left and right hills with harder edges, added the distant hill and filled in the grassy middle ground.
Then it was on to the fun bit. Ā I removed the masking fluid from the people and the fence posts, then painted in the posts. Ā Before starting in the figures, I have them a spattering of masking fluid. Ā I had no control of the spattering, so most of it went onto the sky and the platform but that wasn’t a big deal – the spattering. Pile be removed later without damaging the painting underneath. Ā And then it was on to the figures.
I was disappointed with the dark that I could make from my three primaries, so decided to reach into my box of spares for the Payne’s grey. Ā Rather than outlining the figures with the grey and filling them with primaries, I adopted a new strategy, keeping things abstract but trying to add a hint of detail, so:
– the grey was used in the most shadowy areas, on the left side of the figures in particular
– the yellow was used for the sunniest bits
– I hinted at borders of shapes (arms, coat folds, bottom of coat, shoulders, bottom of hats, etc) with the Payne’s grey, painting both positive and negative shapes.
As a very last step, I spattered the red and yellow cadmiums over the figures and platforms and, once the spattering was dry, rubbed off all the masking fluid spatters.
Final verdict? Ā This is acceptable and going up for sale. To see the price, click here.Ā These abstractified Western paintings tend to get good feedback. Ā The one thing that bugs me about this one is the values. Ā That middle figure’s feet and shins are all dark, just like the shadowy boards underneath them. Ā I should either have made the figure lighter to contrast against the boards or merged the bottom of the figure into the shadows, Charles Reid style. Ā A bit frustrating as I see in my notes on purple cool that it’s important to not make values too dark in this key. Ā Still, I’ve done much worse and it’s good to be able to produce an acceptable watercolour for the first time in a while.
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